Review Detail of kines_slop in My Yandere Psychic Girlfriend
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The writing is weird. I love the concept but everything else is so-so. The mc has no visible distinct traits, hes not even a “mob” type character. Hes also not relatable. Him being rumored to help you get together with your crush is also weird, why would you put that as introduction it doesnt relate to any plot points, relationships, character insight, and mc’s mindset. Also about the writing not being best, theres a lot written for mc’s thought but not for his personality, aside from his dislikes of getting confessed to you virtually know nothing about his hobbies, aspirations, personalty, likes and dislikes. To be fair i only read like 4 chaps, but ive also read plenty of novels to know whats good and whats not so… Read it if you dont mind bad writing, i genuinely love the concept so i’ll probably try to stomach it for the good part as well.
My Yandere Psychic Girlfriend
MSpider
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@kines_slop I thank you for reading my novel and reading it further just because you like the concept. As a writer, I'm very thankful for your review and also grateful for pointing out the plot holes and my mistakes, I'm also constantly improving myself as a writer. As a reader of many mangas and light novels, I can relate to your review. After my final high school exam I'm gonna reboot the writing and fill the plot to increase the experience of the readers. So, at last thank you for reading.
MSpider:@kines_slop I thank you for reading my novel and reading it further just because you like the concept. As a writer, I'm very thankful for your review and also grateful for pointing out the plot holes and my mistakes, I'm also constantly improving myself as a writer. As a reader of many mangas and light novels, I can relate to your review. After my final high school exam I'm gonna reboot the writing and fill the plot to increase the experience of the readers. So, at last thank you for reading.