hmmm i dont like the mc to much he us to whinny for soemoen who surrvied 10 years with zombies...and for loving his father that much suddenly ....it would prob even be that he is crazy and wouldnt care that much .....i mean 10 years changes a lot and relashionship with his dad wasnt goodbefore so ...this is a bit meh
Lullabybao
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LIKEwell it its just smt to ponder about prob not that big of an issue but you know....it is a bit of a strech for it to be like you wrote it :)
Lullabybao:hmmmmm.....đ¤