Review Detail of C1M979N7 in Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

So I've been reading this novel for months already, almost a year. All I can say is that story is good, updating stability is top notched. Unfortunately what I'm concerned is that how the author describe things, like introducing the character's appearance, describing the character's thoughts, putting more unnecessary words making making the story less enjoyable. And also other thing that I'm concerned with is that the story is kinda progress slow, author just keeps giving MC more power ups. Power scales are good, I can see that the author really put a lot of time to it. I advice the author to make the story progress more.