Review Detail of alice_76 in The Flower of Soline
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I love the story and your writing style its very interesting, I also like the mysterious ness it makes me want to read more, I just catched up in like a day. I also just want to say when you describe a character could you be a bit more specific with like hair and face? I find it hard to imagine nox when you say short hair, hair color and eye color for him, but other than that everything is 100/10. keep going i love your work and you are amazing!!
The Flower of Soline
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Aww, thank you! I’m really glad you are enjoying it! As for your question about Nox, I do give the generic appearance of him in chapter 12. He has blue eyes and black short hair and is the most similar to The King. And to add a bit more, he is muscular and handsome much like his siblings. He tends to wear black and favors plain clothing. He is often seen as smirking or relaxed and his eyes usually look dead. He tends to blend into the shadows and loves to play with his knives. His hands have old cuts in them that Aether notices in a later chapter. When he fights or when he is with Aether he shows a small but genuine smile. Does this give you better picture of Nox?
a bit but I got a bad imagination as well so that might also contribute to my inability to give characters faces in novels. thanks for the reply :)
Pudding98:Aww, thank you! I’m really glad you are enjoying it! As for your question about Nox, I do give the generic appearance of him in chapter 12. He has blue eyes and black short hair and is the most similar to The King. And to add a bit more, he is muscular and handsome much like his siblings. He tends to wear black and favors plain clothing. He is often seen as smirking or relaxed and his eyes usually look dead. He tends to blend into the shadows and loves to play with his knives. His hands have old cuts in them that Aether notices in a later chapter. When he fights or when he is with Aether he shows a small but genuine smile. Does this give you better picture of Nox?