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I don't know if it was just me, but when I first started reading this, I expected Aether to be one of those smart, cunning, apathetic characters that are good at everything. I love characters like that as it can be tiring reading about characters that are kind of dumb, dense, crybabies. But Aether is perfect. He seems just like a real person. He's smart and he knows how to get what he wants, but throughout the story we've also seen that he is a real human with emotions. He gets scared, he cries, and he cares about others. It's realistic. I'm not going to say this novel is perfect, nothing is. I'm not going to say it deserves to be a bestseller, because I know it could be better. However, I like it. I think it's good. I look forward to every new chapter. I can't wait to see where the story goes. I'm always wondering what new things we'll learn along the way. Maybe, this story isn't for you. And that's okay. But it is the kind of story that I want to read. There aren't very many chapters out yet, and you can tell it's going to be a long story. I don't know where it will take me. I don't know what to expect. But right now, I'm hanging on the edge of my seat, waiting for more.

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Thank you! Getting the main character right was a big deal for me and I know my writing is not the best, but I’m working on improving my writing skills and potentially getting an editor. So, thank you for reading my story :)

pyxi
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Your writing is already amazing imo, just know that there is always room to improve but that doesn't mean you aren't already doing wonderfully (also if you're looking for an editor... I would like to humbly offer my mediocre skills, if you would have me)