Review Detail of TheFateAvenue in I use Yugioh to battle the multiverse

It's not so good. He goes back in time specifically to find children to save (just because, with no explanation as to why he's risking his life to do so), basically all the extras and train them in arts he doesn't specialize in because he said he was a police with military training or similar. The joke is... That he 'saves' Esdead and other important anime figures just because yes and, although he can argue that they are children, instead of traveling to the past to save people who are adults in your present, he saves the children of that moment XD. I didn't even know them or where they were. The best time travel is to travel back in time and appear in the exact place where the villain would be. Then she finds the bar where Lione is because she knows the whole capital when she has never entered it or in the present and she knows the exact place where Akanne and her sister are together with all those children. I don't like this fanfic, although it is a good start and I congratulate the author. I can guess that this will go in the direction where the 'kids' fall in love with him and want to get married or something in the future.