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Xuyoon
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2021-05-18 22:55

A gripping story! The beginning gives a solid introduction to the status and environment of the protagonist, clearly depicting the current means of survival. I personally really enjoyed the little touch of mystery added to the first few chapters, with the identity of the protagonist being half shrouded in darkness. The writing flowed nicely and did not have any grammar errors. This is the type of novel that really makes you think. It effortlessly submerges you into the story, leaving you craving for the next chapter. All in all, it was quite an enjoyable read. Looking forward to future chapters ^^

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Obligatory review from the Author -> As obvious from the cover and synopsis, this is a high fantasy novel with unique plot elements and lore. Don't read this novel, expecting a one-punch man or something. It might start as a typical weak to strong but it is the MC's journey that matters here. Unlike most cultivation novels, where the MC simply jumps levels every dozen chaps or so, here each step of MC's power progress would be explained and satisfying. And all the characters would be developed well without making their interactions looking bland or make them into 2-D characters that serve no other purpose other than being there for the namesake of being side characters. Because of this, the plot progress wouldn't be rushed nor would it be dragging. I have tried my best to make this novel seem immersive and tried to avoid my previous mistakes of info dumps or tried to make sure that they don't break the reader's immersion. The MC may or may not be OP at the start and depends on reader's perspective. But one thing I can tell for sure is that as the time passes in the novel word and MC gains progress, his uniqueness or specialty would start becoming apparent. The worldbuilding is also completely unique and I take pride in that fact since I brainstormed the concept in this novel a lot including the novel universe. Those who are patient enough will enjoy this read while others who are looking for a one-shot MC who jumps realms every 50 chaps should look elsewhere, thank you :D Please leave a review about your thoughts and don't forget to vote if you took a liking to this novel. I could really use the support of you readers since this novel is under a contest and could help this novel stand out! Thanks for reading this long review ;) P.S No harem planned so far but expect good romance + bonus R18. So, kids who want to remain innocent stay away from these chaps. P.P.S No toxic comments entertained. If anyone wants to leave constructive criticism, I will be happy to accept it as long as it's polite or friendly.

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