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XPrintLv43yr
2021-11-01 18:22

I don't know about everyone else but personaly I like a game novel to be just that, a game novel. Not a conspiracy about your parents death or otherwise. And come on, do you really expect anyone in their right mind to think of the sister as a 19yr old university student, the personality is of a 6yr old. just a young sis cliche.

Avatar Online

Piokilek
4.8
134 Chs

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Micky_Man
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Right, it is so sad that most authors go with the existing little sister routine and they don’t try to create a new type of personality that is based on reality so saaddd am not even gonna bother reading if I see little sister blush it cause I know what’s up xd. Also only a little sister why not a brother or both. I will stop here cause if I start listing out problem with current authors writings a day isn’t enough 😭

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I think this is the best novel I have written so far and I'm inviting everyone to read it. You will not regret and I promise you will get hooked right from the start <3

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LamenThief
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I'm a simple guy; I see Piokilek as the author's name, I read it. But I don't think I will like any novel more than SC. That was the first novel I read on this site and what motivated me to write too.

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patata
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One of the most well written LITRPGs among original works! Characters are fleshed out, and world building is steady. The MC is not much of a talker and he has the tendency to act first, think later, causing lots of hilarious situations to happen. Definitely worth a read!

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Proddy
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I'm only slightly biased because I'm a fan of the author, but I like the novel so far 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

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jstinn
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Great start! Love the concept and i really look forward to the romance „development“ part. Based on the few chapters i read, the FL is awesome too! Definitely worth a read so far!

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DZsTheOnlyWay
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I love it!!! I wish i could time travel to the future just to read the complete novel without waiting. Keep it up with this one pls author-san!!!

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nd26
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If Sprit cultivation was a B grage, then Against Heaven's Will was a A+ and this right here Avtar Online is a masterpiece with a rank of S. Seriously cant wait for the future chapters of this novel[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Alpadin
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I just binge read the first four chapters without realising. First, the author. I've read/an reading all of his books and one thing I know is that the newer his book the better his writing, story building and character development are. That rule doesn't change here. Characters already have their distinctive personalities. The mc is a cold blooded, definitely not the type to spoil his woman to death. In other words, he's not a simp.

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Jesse_Boyer
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Seems like a good start. It got me hooked already. I am a fan of the author so I may be a tad biased. I hope you stick with this story and that there will be steady updates.

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