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The_All_FatherLv103yr
2021-05-24 02:14

The olden story base was good. This one's premise of making a fictitious enemy for the sake of granting him wishes or for that reason was not really necessary. other than that, I felt this idea is a really good and fresh one and has great potential. Looking forward for your next update.

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