Hey this is author here obviously giving myself a 5-star review. I have the concept in my mind for long time and this WPC gave me the boost to turn into the book. I hope everyone enjoys it and please let me know what you think in comments. Your support is the motivation for us authors!!!

Okay! First things first the background is interesting. I usually do not like long-ass explanatory opening but that one picked my interest. There are a lot of good things here. But, as in every book, there are issues. 1) That's a personal thought but I needed to say it, perfect type mcs kind of bore me. I've read too many of those these days and I need something refreshing. As I said, I'm only speaking for myself, although other readers might share my opinion. 2) That's the main issue. There is a mix of the past and present tense in your chaps. Here's my advice, stick to one tense. Apart from dialogs, descriptions should be either present tense or past tense only. It truly is confusing to read two tenses in one sentence. Usually, for various reasons, past tense is the way to go. Tho I got it that you might have wanted to differ your introductory story parts to the actual story. Still, check it out. It truly hinders your work, which is a pity. It has potential but that issue only cages it. Anyway, overall it's a good job. Keep it up! Y.R.

This book is interesting. I rarely read any mafia story before, but I can definitely tell this story will be great in the future. The world is well built and the characters are definitely interesting. Worth check it out.

Not really into Sci-fi but this definitely has potential. I can tell the author has a vast imagination that they didn’t fail to bring their readers into. There are few errors that can easily be fixed. You did a good job, author🤗🤗🤗.

I'm quite not into sci-fi, but the story background and the language really kept me going. The main character is really unique with many things mixed up. Hoping for more chapters!!! All the best with your book[img=recommend]

intriguing plot? check unique main character? double check writing style? triple check check check big thumbs up to you dear author for creating such vivid novel! your writing style is very easy to read with very minimal flaws to punctuation. keep writing and i hope ur novels be successful💖

Interesting book❤❤❤ wonderful plotline💜💜💜 well planned characters and plot🥰🥰🥰 lots of support author🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 recommended for everyone to read it💜💜💜

Ok, so the first thing that attract me here is the world building. It is really detailed, descriptive and obtain many informations! One can easily see that the author put a lot of effort in this world background! Good job author! At first I was thinking that MC has little presence but you said it is intentional so will be waiting for more developments!!

I really like stories that take place in a twisted/apocalyptic world. The way the novel describes the different factions and how they work with one another is very interesting. The only flaws I've found were some sentences feeling like they needed an extra word in it but other than that, it's a well made novel. Keep it up!