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2021-09-05 12:23

Something brilliant has been used in this book, and that is the basic principal of cause and effect. Something so rarely found in webnovels that I have to comment on it. No! You can’t use fire in an enclosed area and expect to be fine! And, the storys pretty clear on how our two leads became the who they are and why they behave how they do. The character development also seems to be progressing well. Though one thing I’ve noticed is the level of trauma the two have gone through. While their obvious unhealthy dependancy for one another is definitly a side affect of it and builds into their relationship(really well, I might add), there doesn’t seem to be much PTSD outside of codependancy and apathy towards death. I’m just a bit bumbed, cuz that’d make it a bit more realistic, but it’s cool. Doesn’t jack up the story. Theres that, and the ignorance levels of a certain 15yr old. But, that was also explained, so . . . otherwise, I’m pretty happy with this book.

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