Review Detail of Minxs in zn/a-n/a

Quality writing that has great attention to detail and leaves the reader wanting to know more. Really solid intro that sets the tone for what kind of novel this would be. Also, I love the creativity I'm seeing already with the races and these little 'moon' phrases. Shows a lot of promise in a new novel. One thing I would warn of is stuffing in too much information in the beginning chapters. As an intro, its fine to include future information that is not explained to attract interest, but I find that there is a little too many loose details that would confuse the reader. This might have to do with the limited amount of chapters, but I would suggest keeping it relatively simple and then slowly expand the world as you get further in the book. Lastly, the descriptions of the characters need a bit more detail. For a first time character intro, its better to state exactly what they look like, then build off their personality later. Short descriptions leave no impression on the reader when these characters are mentioned later on. All of this is my humble opinions, so I hope this helped! I see a lot of potential in this book, keep up the good work Author!