This is a really well-written opening chapter. You can tell by the flowing prose, interesting descriptions and patience of the author in writing the scene and developing little character quirks that this is written by someone with a lot of talent and sound technical knowledge. I am really intrigued to follow the protagonist further on his mysterious journey and hopefully find out who he is and who his mother was. Really good opening to a story. An interesting mystery to hook the reader and invite them to take the adventure alongside the protagonist through a strange fictional world. I will be sure to add this to my library and keep following to see how this develops. Really good beginning.
MrChinchila
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