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2022-05-21 18:57

This isnt a bad story, I just feel like some things could have been ..... more. By that I mean, she had the mentality of a child, so her sister was supposed to help take care of her. she was adopted by a loving, super rich family. so aside from having a stupid sister, she got a golden ticket. The stupid sister has more love from the parents, which makes sense since she has more of a need and is stunning. But its not like her own life is awful, so why she hates the sister and wants her to be constantly humiliated, bullied and even die can only be attributes to her being a freaking awful person. I get that she is one of the white lotus villans, but usually they have a reason to hate the heroine. Even if it is as simple as having the love of the ML. The parents also seem oblivious. You simple daughter only spends time with her sister and doesnt really go off on her own. why would you not be suspicious of the fact she wears clown levels of make up and always finds herself in bad situations? would you not wonder why and how she puts of all that junk, why she is obsessed with a certain guy and why she gets in dangerous situations? The MC comes from a world of violence and needing to use your brain, but she only seems interested in the ML at the moment. which is fun, but considering how she has been treated and the fact that she now has loving parents that are getting scammed by her evil sister, I want some face slapping and plotting. Then the ML. It was mentioned he fell in love at first sight and then he married her. she is now clearly not simple. she is actively flirting and trying to get closer to him, but not only does he do nothing about it, he runs away half the time. what? Why wouldnt you want to spend more time learning about the person you love and married? THe way the MC is with the ML is great, I just hope as the story progresses, we see her do more.

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