Review Detail of Twink_98 in The New Moons - [GL]

Decided to review my own story, that's fun. I'll be honest, sometimes there are errors and mistakes. Sometimes I need to tweak the details to fit the story. I wrote it because it fits everything I want to read, or what I think I wanna read anyway. I'm determined to keep writing this until it's finished, even if there are weeks between updates. :)