Review Detail of Aug_Akise in Venture of Tomorrow

A warm greetings for all the readers here! First of all, English is not my first language so mistakes are always present but I'm gradually working on my English grammar as much as possible. Second, if you think that the first few chapters (well too many wrong grammar, yes) are fast paced. Just assume that this is the first portion of the plot for this really is a part of my imagination. Third, Yes! The plots came from my imagination. so any names, characters, places, time and event, plot, etc. are fictional. Fourth, I am still a student so this story-novel is just a hobby of mine. I can't make many chapters in one week just like those normal books but I already have the proper endinnnngggg.. Fifth, I'd like to apologize if you think that this is a typical harem that you see everywhere. This story has vast point of views of the characters all over the story so harem plots are not going to be there as following chapters proceed. And last, Thank you for reading my book!!!