Review Detail of N0_Hope in The Second Son Of Omniman
Review detail
Most accurrate evaluation . I was unable to continue due to the bad writting and the lack of " immersion " . I felt like I was reading a coment of someone bored. I don't feel the sensation of seing it happen in front of me . Maybe other people might like it but I cannot continue.
The Second Son Of Omniman
deadly_orange
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And I mean the lack of immersion may be explained in one or two chapters because I was not in the mood because of some people but I still think it's a pretty good quality story. But seriously have you seen almost every fanfic on this site you usually can't get too much better than the quality of my fic tbh
deadly_orange:And I mean the lack of immersion may be explained in one or two chapters because I was not in the mood because of some people but I still think it's a pretty good quality story. But seriously have you seen almost every fanfic on this site you usually can't get too much better than the quality of my fic tbh
Well it's because I wrote those chapters when I was tired wasn't trying to make it that immersive and in have improved lol. my many fanfics are proof
SuicidalRussian:Just Improve imo....
deadly_orange:Well it's because I wrote those chapters when I was tired wasn't trying to make it that immersive and in have improved lol. my many fanfics are proof
