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II_Dandy_II
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The author is improving his writing it seems which is ok. The only problem I have is in the early chaps when the Trauma the MC supposedly had has no explaination. Not to mention the way he loves his father was getting a little creepy at first. Overall it could be better but still a good read imo.

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The Second Son Of Omniman

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deadly_orange
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Thanks lol, anyways the trauma was mainly abandonment based, but this was a reality created within his own mind basically. As revealed in the newest chapter I did drop hints but I do know it isn't obvious. Anyways it was creepy because it was meant to be, some of my replies may be seen otherwise what I was saying the fatherly love part wasn't creepy but, the mc was obsessing over his father and making him proud, and it was due to how recent his old life was, which he gradually got better was what I was showing

deadly_orange
deadly_orangeAuthordeadly_orange

Oh btw it is going to better since its finally going to be reviewed by me and edited, so yeah the quality should be much better