Review Detail of Great_Young_Master in The Second Son Of Omniman

The writing quality definitely needs work but readable for the most part. The MC CRAVES for Omni Man's attention and the author said it was caused by his past life's trauma. It's really not that flashed out, imo. Why? It's because we have to look through the comments to truly understand why and not in the actual story. The MC doesn't really have any character development and from what I could tell from the author, it'll most likely not gonna happen. However, hopefully the author proves me wrong on that. Now, let's talk about updating stability. The author has pretty much made 5 chapters that's not actually related to the story and most of them, him ranting about haters. Of course, you're gonna get haters and people who likes your story. However, be the better person and prove them through YOUR own writing in stories and not argue with them. Arguing with people online is pretty much useless and will only get you frustrated. Some people are gonna write bad things about your work and when other people realize the things you've improved on, they'll most likely defend you. Now, that is a better feeling than calling people out just because they've been pestering you.