Review Detail of Yuri_yuri in The Second Son Of Omniman

Item: The Second Son Of Omniman
Rating: 4

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Yuri_yuriLv43yrYuri_yuri

I've only seen the invincible series and did some research ... 1. the writing is pretty bad but can be fixed 2. the first chapter is a bit confusing 3. the scenarios are not well planned (the mc will be a "loyal" viltrumite ? "

The Second Son Of Omniman

deadly_orange

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deadly_orangeAuthordeadly_orange

How is the writing bad you know what scratch that I dont even want to know your reasoning, don't know how its confusing a young teen who, didn't mentally develop due to his environment dies due to fire caused by a bomb which was somewhat insinuated,

3yr

deadly_orangeAuthordeadly_orange

And a loyal viltrumite how is that confusing, it means he won't defect and neither will omniman in this one at least that's what I planned but whatever

3yr

deadly_orangeAuthordeadly_orange

And seriously explain how the writing is bad because chances are your reasons might be on purpose for plot reasons or things that are explained but you guys don't pay attention to context clues

3yr

Ronald_McDongaldLv12Ronald_McDongald

Mc has daddy issues in previos life makes the most of having a dad in the new life. Events from old life makes his distrust humans and humanity as a whole. whats so hard to understand?

2yr