Honestly I’m 40 chapters in, so take my review with a grain of salt, but while the world is great, as well the update schedule, I just can’t turn my brain off anymore. This is mainly due to the characters such as Yan and that other girl the MC saved in Pierre Bistro. They feel to copy and paste, and not only that, they feel contradictory to the setting, unable to hold their emotions in a grimdark, surprise they didn’t die, even as a easy target, with how easy it is to make them cry, signifying a lack of emotional control. My other dislike is the background of the Little Match Girl, like sure it sad, but do you really think someone would do a Disney villian routine, and walk to the house of the victim’s family and announce their crime, without getting stabbed?
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