Review Detail of KingAraragi in The Impurity's Ascension

Ok so I read the first three chapters. I plan on reading more later, but there are some interesting things I've noticed. Quality 4.9/5 Decent writing style. Not too flashy, and also nor bad in any way. Other than a few errors in sentence structure, it was smooth. If there's one thing I can nitpick, it's that you haven't really done a great job of describing the appearance of the characters. I'm not going to hold that against you though, because you might have in a chapter I haven't read. Updates 5/5 Nothing to say really. Story design 3/5 In the first chapter there is way too much going on. Powers are used, names are dropped, there's fighting, and all at the same time it's hard to understand who's talking because we have no clue who is on what side doing what. I understand that this is some sort of flash forward scene, or a scene to get the reader interested, but it was a bit much. The second chapter is better about this, but there is still a lot thrown at the reader to understand. World Background 5/5 I can tell that there is a lot of stuff going on in this story by how much info was dropped in the first few chapters. The world seems like it is full of info ready to be read. Overall, it was a 4.4 from me. I plan to read more later, because this was certainly interesting. Good luck on future chapters!