Item: The Impurity's Ascension
Rating: 5

SkrollzLv143yr

2021-09-19 21:24

Great read absolutely loving it so far, keep up the good work! If there was one thing I had to criticize it's the fact that we know from chapter one that the mc doesn't really go back in time, he just hops to a new timeline. it is not made clear if he understands this since he acts reckless and glosses over what happens after he dies at times but he also sometimes acts as if he understands this and want to protect the people he cares about even after he is dead. either way it's a small nitpick in an otherwise excellent story!

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