Review Detail of Ms_Jane in Kidnapped by Love

I love the sypnosis and how the story includes difference in religion. I can see that the author is very fair. I love the plot of the story. But one thing that I can say is that when you right a conversation it should start with this " and ends with this ". You can also use a comma at the end of a conversation when it was followed by an action tag/ dialogue tag. I think it's more appealing than using this -. but this is just my opinion, I am not a professional writer too. I just want to share what I've learned. but all in all, your story is amazing. You're a great Author! keep safe!😊