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Lv13yr
2021-05-26 22:47

This fiction will drag you into tales of knights and courts. It is pretty well written, and characters are really well defined. There is no blackboard character is that fiction, I can assure. I just had trouble following the plot that tends to jump here and there. It is a book with lots of material, and many subplots. I gather they might eventually tie up at some point, but until then, it can be a bit confusing.

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Thank you for your thoughtful response. I'll try to improve my writing and yes, the plot is a big spider-web. Your comments have really helped me widen my understanding of the book.

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Thank you [img=recommend]

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