This fiction will drag you into tales of knights and courts. It is pretty well written, and characters are really well defined. There is no blackboard character is that fiction, I can assure. I just had trouble following the plot that tends to jump here and there. It is a book with lots of material, and many subplots. I gather they might eventually tie up at some point, but until then, it can be a bit confusing.
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Thank you for your thoughtful response. I'll try to improve my writing and yes, the plot is a big spider-web. Your comments have really helped me widen my understanding of the book.
It shows, and I have no doubt that you will tie all the lines. But given you write it, you know it like no other (probably by heart now). You cannot switch to the point of view of a reader. Hence the need for people to comment to tell what they understand and what they miss. The people they remember of don't. Hail to you reader, read this fic and don't hesitate to comment !
mcross_1005:Thank you for your thoughtful response. I'll try to improve my writing and yes, the plot is a big spider-web. Your comments have really helped me widen my understanding of the book.
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d_elfe:It shows, and I have no doubt that you will tie all the lines. But given you write it, you know it like no other (probably by heart now). You cannot switch to the point of view of a reader. Hence the need for people to comment to tell what they understand and what they miss. The people they remember of don't. Hail to you reader, read this fic and don't hesitate to comment !
