Item: High in pursuit
Rating: 4.4
Author: PrugnaKerai

PrugnaKeraiLv23yr

2021-07-05 04:19

The plot is written quite smoothly. Well done. I would say that the expression and use of language for this type of genre is subpar. There needs to be more 'umph' and excitement when writing and describing gory scenes. On a final note, some of the grammar was rather askew - I would advise fixing this so your next readers can enjoy your work!

High in pursuit

nia94

4.8

68 Chs

Liked by 1 people

Replies1

nia_94Lv11

that's a really good advice. i'll try my best to meet the reader's expectation.🤩🤩🤩

3yr

Other Reviews

Trusha_authorLv2

This is such an interesting book! I love isekai and this one has a unique spin to it which differs it from the typical ones and is fleshed out well. Good job author ❤️.

3yr

Aj_FridayLv2

This is a nice read! Lol im glad you went for a different spin on the isekai genre instead of the typical truck-san...... tho truck-san still would have been hilarious. the book al together is captiVating. good job!

3yr

Dieu_VanLv11

I fell in love...i wanted to find some interesting crime story....two handsome characters...they are so sweet together...you wouldnt be bored [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr

Dieu_VanLv11

Original and fantastic story...unusual relationship between detective and killer...the both of them are smart...the characters are not only transmigrators...alive or dead...they have chance go to the new world..everything is connected

3yr

ReiSeirinLv2

I started reading it and I didn't expect it to be out of my expectation. the character, the antagonist was really my type, so cool. It was really out of my expectations. however, there is some point that I don't get it. 😅

3yr

MarikitLv2

Change the Canon Fodder's Fate lol. What unique plot there is and the author had created the system world in the most comprehensive way that it is so realistic. Can't wait to read for more. Loca is here!

3yr

_HS_Lv2

I have a crush on the main character, like wow you built your characters in an amazing way, and I have to admit you are a talented writer, amazing novel and so entertaining

3yr

devils_succeserLv12

if you also made a story following the serial killers point of view that would be truly amazing 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 and I'd definitely read!!!!

3yr

Rizwana_Khatun_3030Lv10

The story is unique and intriguing. TBH this book is nail-biting-thriller. Ryan's character is complex and realistic. The synopsis could have been better though. Keep updating author.

3yr

AfismusLv1

Horror books are not really up to my league-so I don't know if I can review professionally. The book is good and detailed, yes, detailed, and I love detailed books. Kinds skipped some parts cuz i don't read gore, but this gives a wave of thrill in my system, kudos for that.

3yr

The Concession

~He gave himself up to save her~ He made the wrong choice now he had to pay the price. √√√√√√√√ Careful little princess, careful little boy what you choose, for to consent, is to lose. The dragon's mouth is wide, filled with bones. It reeks of death and human flesh. With gold and diamond, he lures you in. He has beady pearls-flames for eyes, And like a sheep to the slaughter, you're served on a platter. He never gets enough; for like a lion, he goes about seeking whom to devour—his sole desire. So children, run, keep your concession, Or ye might be next. Ye have been warned. Remember this tale...the serpent never sleeps.

Taiwolilly · Horror

4.8

48 Chs

DEATHLY APP

Hastin was running out of ideas for his horror novel. By chance, he comes across an app which gives him ideas for his story. In the beginning, everything was smooth flowing. But later he finds out that whoever reads his story disappears and becomes the story character themselves...

Darlene_Virginia · Horror

4.7

109 Chs

A Bond That Can’t Be Broken

A young girl who has an amazing life never saw what was coming her way. Just one moment her mom and her were laughing and the next their car was engulfed in flames. When she'd awoken she wasn't home where was she ? Had she been taken? Had she been kidnapped or was this person going to let her go home when she was better? Well in real life no stories have happy ending will hers be one that welcomes that reality. I used an app to make the picture and took the pictures from online.

micahbotha · Horror

Not enough ratings

21 Chs

Negative -Girls: To Live And Die

A (not) rom-com of a (broken) immortal tutor and his (dying) female students.

Little_Foxxy · Horror

4.8

69 Chs

DEMON INVASION

During the construction of a subway tunnel, they weren't expecting an inter-dimensional portal connecting earth and hell. We opened a Pandora's box and demons rushed outside, infecting whatever living they could find. Within days, drought take over the land, creating a dystopian world. Survivors were left to fight with the undead. But, god have a plan for us all. The epic adventure has only just begun.

COAmal · Horror

Not enough ratings

16 Chs

The Mafia king

Daniele, Gianni, Armani, Santino Robustelli are the sons of Valerio Robustelli A well known business man in Italy with many contacts Gianni is set to take over his fathers business with his at enty o the only catch is he has to find a wife. He has just the girl in mind Alora Benson who he met almost eight years ago when they moved to the U.K. they were good friends well a lot more than good friends she was his first love but due to family circumstances his family had to leave and move back to Italy. Now he’s back in the U.K to find her and take her back to Italy with him for their wedding. He has no idea of his Italian life of what his family were they were ordinary people to her, will she realise that he is intact the Mafia king and their marriage will seal a lot of business deals within the Mafia circle.

EmmaLouise · Horror

Not enough ratings

57 Chs

Horrific Shorts: Zombie Edition

In "Horrific Shorts: Zombie Edition," Sir Faraz masterfully crafts a collection of spine-chilling tales that plunge readers into the heart of a post-apocalyptic world overrun by the undead. Each story in this anthology is a finely-tuned exploration of fear, survival, and the human condition when faced with relentless horror. Sir Faraz’s vivid and compelling storytelling brings to life a series of unforgettable characters, each struggling to navigate a landscape where danger lurks around every corner and the line between life and death is perilously thin. With a unique blend of suspense, terror, and poignant moments, "Horrific Shorts: Zombie Edition" is a must-read for fans of the zombie genre and horror enthusiasts alike. Sir Faraz’s debut in the world of short horror fiction is nothing short of spectacular, promising readers a thrilling and terrifying journey through his imaginative and nightmarish creations.

Sir Faraz · Horror

5.0

1124 Chs

Random Horror Stories - 500

Standalone horror stories, approximately 500 to 1000 words per chapter, with each story fully independent of the others. If a character's name appears in multiple stories, it should not imply a connection between them unless explicitly noted otherwise.

Invensing · Horror

Not enough ratings

805 Chs