Review Detail of Oussama_Neaga in Reborn as Tai Bai Yun Sheng in reverend insanity

Item: Reborn as Tai Bai Yun Sheng in reverend insanity
Rating: 4.4

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Oussama_NeagaAuthor3yrOussama_Neaga

HI!!!! AUTHOR HERE SO I JUST WANT TO SAY this is my first novel and I am new on the writing world beside english is not my first language so I hope you don't drop the story in the few first chapter and I will try to make the story have no plot hole att all BYEEE!!!

Reborn as Tai Bai Yun Sheng in reverend insanity

Oussama_Neaga

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draculemorningstarLv4draculemorningstar

harem?

3yr

ArturiaSimpLv3ArturiaSimp

Thats the first thing you ask? 😂

draculemorningstar:harem?

3yr

LPummill3Lv13LPummill3

I really want to read something like this its just that the grammer is so bad it doesn’t make sense

3yr

Oussama_NeagaAuthorOussama_Neaga

I am sorry it is hard to read it but I am trying to improve my writing skill so just hang there after 10 days you will find no mistake in it

LPummill3:I really want to read something like this its just that the grammer is so bad it doesn’t make sense

3yr

LPummill3Lv13LPummill3

Whats happeing in 10 days?

Oussama_Neaga:I am sorry it is hard to read it but I am trying to improve my writing skill so just hang there after 10 days you will find no mistake in it

3yr

Oussama_NeagaAuthorOussama_Neaga

I am taking private lesson in english and I will end high school in 13 days so I will h1ve time to creat a good fan fic

LPummill3:Whats happeing in 10 days?

3yr