Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss

Kyah kyah kyah~ Love is in the air, and this one hits the spot! I love the first few chapters of the story, especially the first one! The only thing that I can suggest is the usage of "Showing" and avoid "Telling" what happened. Show how her heart skipped a million beats. Show the emotions stirring inside the girl's heart and mind, thinking nothing but him. Explain their body language more, something like every touch sends electrical currents gusing through the skin and veins. Besides that, I think this novel has potential! ^^