Well imo the writing quality is pretty good and same with the story development but i thing that's ruining it for me is the mc. He is a hypocrite, whiny, and sometimes smart and other time super dumb. He ranted on how much he hate teenagers and the qualities that make them bad but he has exactly those qualities. plus the comments are excusing his behavior by say he just a teenager after he just ripped on them and how he doesn't want to be like them. Overall I'm announcing my departure from this plane/story.
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