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SkeleBlade
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I have to admit, while I wasn't too inclined on reading at first, after a while I am glad I did. The story itself is better than some other Gamer Fics that I have read in that the MC makes smart decisions in regards to some problems, and the progression of stats isn't insane. Plus each chapter so far has some heft to it, unlike other stories that have a great chapter count, but the chapter's themselves are read within 5 mins. Writing Quality (5): I found that the story is very readable, with no glaring grammar and spelling mistakes that I could find, not that I was looking all that hard. Even with the inclusion of the system, the structure is nice to look at and easy to understand. Stability of Updates (5): Way too early to say much, but so far 10-13 chapter within a week is pretty good. Story Development (5): I can say that I haven't felt myself getting bored of reading and can't wait for the next chapter. Each chapter feels fresh and entertaining, as compared to other Gamer Fics where the MC is childish and more or less copies The Gamer manhua in regards to development. Character Design (5): An interesting idea of a human who can see through the mist. So far the MC has made smart decisions, while in the moment, and while some things were being rushed, like the talk with Daedalus, I find myself liking the MC. World Background (5): Still a bit too early to say much. Nevertheless, what the readers do see is an explanation of various topics that are a bit obscure, such as Frey and his origins. On a personal not, I like harems, but I also don't want this story to be ruined with the MC trying to obtain women as if they were pokemon. Regardless of that, if there is romance in the future, just make it gradual, and try not to ruin the various shippings of the Percy Jackson universe. I would also suggest to write chapters out, but not immediately post them. You should keep to a schedule of posting chapters, as to not feel the panic of releasing a chapter everyday, resulting in substandard work, and have a backlog of chapters so that you can ocasionally take your mind off writing, as to not have writers block which has ended many stores. Overall, I am excited for this story, and feel that this story has the makings to be a great one in the future.

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Percy Jackson: Human Gamer

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Donovan_Mullin
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Personally I don’t like harems

Donovan_Mullin
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Thus story is great

SkeleBlade
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Everyone has their opinions. But I would like to ask why you don't like harems? I like the harems that have the MC get together with the women that either have a tragic end, or end up alone. Konan and Tsunade from Naruto are the two characters I think of when it comes to this. I will also say that I think they are hot, so I won't lie and say that that doesn't play into my reasoning. Of course, if the harems exceed 3 or 4, I start to be less inclined to it, since it focuses on obtaining women, rather than building a relationship. Though if there is one thing I hate, it would be the people who leave reviews only saying they hate/love the story because of the harems. Its an opinion, and like I said that is fine, but there is no need to show the world, nor is it appropriate to drag down a story based solely on this factor. A review, in my opinion, is meant to either help the author improve their writing, or help readers in either reading or avoid reading the story. A review is not meant to say either nothing, I am looking at those who only use emojis, or just say one thing, and I am looking at those from both the Harem Sect, and No-Harem Sect. If the premise of the story is interesting enough and fit some basic criteria (Which changes day to day, but usually revolve around Romance and a particular fiction). I like reading stories that have harems, and I also like stories that don't have them. If anything, most of the stories that I am currently reading are non-harems. (Yes, I did a count at 65:49; non-harem:harem) Of course some of the stories, of both categories, haven't been updated in a while, or is still very early in development, and can't say for either. Don't get me wrong either. I have absolutely avoided reading some stories that have a terrible harem, and I dropped them immediately, but I still tried them.

Donovan_Mullin:Personally I don’t like harems
Atuli
AtuliLv2Atuli

I just like the work you put into your review and comment back, so I thought it deserved a like and an appreciation comment. Although I don’t overly enjoy harems im still in the neutral party I think. Tbh im into the FemaleMC-Fantasy-Strong-Reincarnation-Fanfic. Like a female reincarnated Madara Uchiha and stuff like that, strong FL is a good FL :P. Anyways thanks for honest and detailed review. I have no idea how long ago your comment was so... sorry about that~

SkeleBlade:Everyone has their opinions. But I would like to ask why you don't like harems? I like the harems that have the MC get together with the women that either have a tragic end, or end up alone. Konan and Tsunade from Naruto are the two characters I think of when it comes to this. I will also say that I think they are hot, so I won't lie and say that that doesn't play into my reasoning. Of course, if the harems exceed 3 or 4, I start to be less inclined to it, since it focuses on obtaining women, rather than building a relationship. Though if there is one thing I hate, it would be the people who leave reviews only saying they hate/love the story because of the harems. Its an opinion, and like I said that is fine, but there is no need to show the world, nor is it appropriate to drag down a story based solely on this factor. A review, in my opinion, is meant to either help the author improve their writing, or help readers in either reading or avoid reading the story. A review is not meant to say either nothing, I am looking at those who only use emojis, or just say one thing, and I am looking at those from both the Harem Sect, and No-Harem Sect. If the premise of the story is interesting enough and fit some basic criteria (Which changes day to day, but usually revolve around Romance and a particular fiction). I like reading stories that have harems, and I also like stories that don't have them. If anything, most of the stories that I am currently reading are non-harems. (Yes, I did a count at 65:49; non-harem:harem) Of course some of the stories, of both categories, haven't been updated in a while, or is still very early in development, and can't say for either. Don't get me wrong either. I have absolutely avoided reading some stories that have a terrible harem, and I dropped them immediately, but I still tried them.
SkeleBlade
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Thanks, when I review I try to either say somthing that will help improve the author's writing, or give other readers insight of the story. Personally I stray away from stories that have the MC as a female. Its very rare for me to view such content, though stories along the line of the Reincarnted Villainess I usually read even though it has a female MC. The only reason I can think of as to why I stray away from such stories is mostly like cause I am male and like to superimpose my thoughts on the MC. Also, when you say a female reincarnated as Madara, do you mean like in a gender bender way where the female mind is in a male body, or just a female Madara?

Atuli:I just like the work you put into your review and comment back, so I thought it deserved a like and an appreciation comment. Although I don’t overly enjoy harems im still in the neutral party I think. Tbh im into the FemaleMC-Fantasy-Strong-Reincarnation-Fanfic. Like a female reincarnated Madara Uchiha and stuff like that, strong FL is a good FL :P. Anyways thanks for honest and detailed review. I have no idea how long ago your comment was so... sorry about that~
Atuli
AtuliLv2Atuli

Im a male reader but I still rather female MC’s, dunno why, they seem more fun sometimes :P. Anyways I was referring to a recent novel I reading as an example but it was someone reincarnated into Madara, but Madara was born female. Obviously the romance part would have been Hashirama and it was in the Warring States Era, But i think it would focus more kn action considering the time period (hopefully). Too bad that it was dropped 8 years ago with only 6 chapters. Fanfiction authors never end their stories it seems ;( I think I have it as a tab if you are lacking reading material but it seems it won’t be very interesting to you. I was reading another novel with all the descendents of Indra being female, that one was fun too~ Its also why I normally stay away from repetitive CN, female main characters are rare. Most authors just have female characters as eye candy and treasure to collect by the roadside. :/

SkeleBlade:Thanks, when I review I try to either say somthing that will help improve the author's writing, or give other readers insight of the story. Personally I stray away from stories that have the MC as a female. Its very rare for me to view such content, though stories along the line of the Reincarnted Villainess I usually read even though it has a female MC. The only reason I can think of as to why I stray away from such stories is mostly like cause I am male and like to superimpose my thoughts on the MC. Also, when you say a female reincarnated as Madara, do you mean like in a gender bender way where the female mind is in a male body, or just a female Madara?