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The major problem with the book is the synopsis... As both the title and synopsis offer nothing about what the book is really about it makes it hard to be intregued by the book to even read the first chapter... That one word synopsis will work if its an author already famous for good work at it would intregue... Just hope author learns from this... First impression that is the title, synopsis & tags are really important...

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Error In The System

Dashiharu

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Thanks for feedback. I changed synopsis and I might change the title?