well first of all the entire setup is so heavily inspired by another fanfic by the name of 'A Knight's Will', that it's pretty much a cheap copy that has different characters, and that's just the overall setup, the story itself is waaay too fast pace and the characters are simply going through the lines, there's no life or personality in them, not to mention that the plot feels incredibly forced, furthermore, although there are barely any grammatical errors a lot of important details are glossed over and barely mentioned and those that are were done poorly, this story honestly feels like a poorly written fanfic of the previously mentioned fanfic 'A Knight's Will'. Note: if you're the author then know this review is meant purely as constructive criticism, so no hard feelings ok? P.S. if you hadn't already i recommend reading 'A knight's Will', even though it's abondend it's still good and there are a good 59 chapters to enjoy.
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