I'm enjoying this story decently so far. Worth noting that I've only read through Chapter 2. I assume English isn't your first language based on what you've told me, but you still write very well in English. The world-building, while not perfect, is better than I could probably do. Overall, I do like your story, and I'll read more later.
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