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I actually like the premise that the MC is not genius and his advancement is gained thanks to his system, and also the fact that the MC isn't an egomaniac who constantly pursue praises from nameless spectators like in a lot of Xianxia. However, it is quite hard to get absorbed into this story because the author's clear lack of writing experience. The story is being told like an explanation book. It's the "all tell and lack of show" kind. The enemies so far were basically the same, and the outcomes to his enemies are likewise the same. It was always these random guys wanting to kill MC because his low cultivation, and MC trying to lure the enemies to make their approach first so he can kill him quickly and discreetly, then MC shows strenght - the enemies pull the misunderstanding card - MC gives fist of bull strength! - the enemies died. The story lacks suspense, it has monotone vibe, and although there has been supposedly foreshadows being planted here and there, the direction of the story as of chapter 123 still isn't clear. I don't recommend this.
My Girlfriend From Turquoise Pond Requests My Help After My Millennium Seclusion
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The funny thing is that having read until chapter 220 or so you start to find out that the people that attack the mc don't do it for random reasons. His strength on the surface is certainly the reason to only send out people he can easily beat with his actual strength but there are multiple groups (divine human race, devils, demons) that either want him dead or change sides because of his identity as the personal disciple of the 9th peak peak master. The more you read the more you get evidence that the story is actually well planed. Big things that are happening far away from the sect still find ways to mix their karma with people in the sect, even people like the mc who seem to be hiding from the big dangerous things happening outside get mixed up. I have a feeling that this level of planning is a sign that the author might not be as inexperienced as some of the earlier chapters make him look like.