Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Future Dog Project (5)

The story and writing quality are nice! What a genius idea that was revolutionary and was not something that has anyone had come up with before. My only suggestion was to break up too long paragraphs into smaller ones. It will make the reading experience to be easier and lighter for the eyes. This kind of novel has high potential and will become great in the near future! Nice cover by the way! 😉