I really liked this story and characters both in background and development. Until chapter 150-162 then I had to force myself to read till chapter 200 and finally gave up. You destroyed the foundation of Cho Lou character completely when and after she found out she had been married without her consent. Yes she resisted but for a proud person of such a high standing who die rather than suffer a loss or indignity like that. She based on her character should have become exceptionally cold, ruthless, and far more dangerous to him. He would need to make it up to a lot of persistence and remove the married portion and woo her from the beginning again. she should have lost a great deal if not all warmth for him not to mention with her IQ how could she not realize it was him or at least someone working for him stopping her hacking. but instead she bows to it and all these assaults from him and keeps coming back without actually doing anything just destroyed her whole character for me she went from strong to be perfectly honest weak and stereotypical in this story. I still like your style of writing so Ill check in when another story comes up.
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