Review Detail of Sabin_Subedi_Fei in Yin-Yang Harmony System
Review detail
This is the third review after 210 chapters that includes two volumes. Please read this so that you won't need to waste words to complain. First, Mike is not a hero, not a cold killer, not smart, and not even fearless to his death. He is an idiot that doesn't feel likes thinking through the circumstances. He is emotionally weak so character development is the major part of this book. As a writer, I apologize for not being consistent over some factors that are explained early in the story which over explains many things that are not necessary. You can freely skip those details in your mind. For writing this book, I am very satisfied with my story development and if you read it carefully, you can find hints of future events early in the story. As much as I spent time writing MC, I have tried to keep other main characters 3D. You can find it as you reach the second volume. Finally, the last thing that I want to tell you is something that speaks to the story tags. It's an action, adventure, adult, comedic, dramatic, story set in a world where adult stuff is very common.
Yin-Yang Harmony System
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
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It does focus on the real world but the virtual world is confusing. Because there are some factors left unexplained about the virtual world.
Justmethinking:I’m Currently still at chapter 11 but i really need to ask, does the novel focus on virtual reality thing or on real world more?
could you tell me, does scarlet,the mc first love, goin to join mc harem's or what?? does you use some old-school strategy, such as betrayal of one of his lovers or death one's of his lovers (she will not be live again) or many other dark ways or strategies, to make the mc more diligent for his cultivation to gain strength??
Sabin_Subedi_Fei:It does focus on the real world but the virtual world is confusing. Because there are some factors left unexplained about the virtual world.
No_Name_1524:could you tell me, does scarlet,the mc first love, goin to join mc harem's or what?? does you use some old-school strategy, such as betrayal of one of his lovers or death one's of his lovers (she will not be live again) or many other dark ways or strategies, to make the mc more diligent for his cultivation to gain strength??
I'm sorry after I see the scene where Scarlet make mc real love become like someone who's doesn't have dignity, o lose it and doesn't read it anymore
KFCmicchicken:Does she die, cause i hate her soooo much. if she gets in the harem i going to lose it
No_Name_1524:I'm sorry after I see the scene where Scarlet make mc real love become like someone who's doesn't have dignity, o lose it and doesn't read it anymore
No_Name_1524:I'm sorry after I see the scene where Scarlet make mc real love become like someone who's doesn't have dignity, o lose it and doesn't read it anymore
