This is the perfect rating I could give myself. Well, now let's talk thoroughly about each quality and why they deserve stars that are given: (Disclaimer- This book is extremely dedicated to improving the length of your little brother, so if you are under eighteen. Please proceed with caution) Writing Quality- It has been around nine months since I've started writing my first book. And I don't how much I've improved? I don't even know whether I have improved or not. So, please comment after reading the chapter whether my writing was good, bad, or worst. Stability of Updates- You'll get a chapter each day and it will increase as the conditions set in the first chapter of this book. So, please support this book with voting power stones for more content. Till now, I haven't missed a single day and I am not planning to miss either. Story Development- It's not going for rapid development or slow development. Everything will improve at its own pace and if you read the story carefully, you will understand why? And it has a unique story plot behind each arc. Character Design- My characters aren't the perfect ones that's why character development is one of the main scopes in my books. My characters will suffer, they will understand and thoroughly change to become what they were meant to be. World Background- It is a bit lacking in the first twenty chapters, but the world will be soon revealed with lots of new techs, explorations, story plots, and exciting adventures. Now, let's talk about why should you read this story. - To improve the length of your little brother - To laugh out and forget all kinds of tension - To immerse yourself in the world of VR and superheroes - To support me!!!
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Liked by 26 people
LIKEI don't want to give spoilers but.......... Drama is not confirmed yet but you can see some of it in earlier locked chapters. As for 1st and 2nd questions, he cultivates with the help of his harem.
Thesoultaker88:I have some questions 1)will mc love his harem or will it be more like one nightstand and leave 2)will there be drama and last 3) will mc takes his harem with him if he goes to far away places
xP_Hero:FFS why did you name the MC after the boxer? Now when one reads his name, he will think about a person totally diferent from the story, breaking the immersion. If you carelessly give names for your characters, you're not respecting your own work and originality.
Legendary_Gear5:From what i saw in a review the mc is dense is that true ? Bc i cant stand them
Sabin_Subedi_Fei:I didn't know that Mike Tyson was the name of a famous boxer. Sorry but I do not watch boxing.
Sabin_Subedi_Fei:I didn't know that Mike Tyson was the name of a famous boxer. Sorry but I do not watch boxing.
Sabin_Subedi_Fei:I didn't know that Mike Tyson was the name of a famous boxer. Sorry but I do not watch boxing.
Can you tell where you live ? Because Mike Tyson is quite famous all around the world since more than 30 years, only second to Mohamed Ali. Lol
Sabin_Subedi_Fei:I didn't know that Mike Tyson was the name of a famous boxer. Sorry but I do not watch boxing.