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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthor2yrSabin_Subedi_Fei

This is the perfect rating I could give myself. Well, now let's talk thoroughly about each quality and why they deserve stars that are given: (Disclaimer- This book is extremely dedicated to improving the length of your little brother, so if you are under eighteen. Please proceed with caution) Writing Quality- It has been around nine months since I've started writing my first book. And I don't how much I've improved? I don't even know whether I have improved or not. So, please comment after reading the chapter whether my writing was good, bad, or worst. Stability of Updates- You'll get a chapter each day and it will increase as the conditions set in the first chapter of this book. So, please support this book with voting power stones for more content. Till now, I haven't missed a single day and I am not planning to miss either. Story Development- It's not going for rapid development or slow development. Everything will improve at its own pace and if you read the story carefully, you will understand why? And it has a unique story plot behind each arc. Character Design- My characters aren't the perfect ones that's why character development is one of the main scopes in my books. My characters will suffer, they will understand and thoroughly change to become what they were meant to be. World Background- It is a bit lacking in the first twenty chapters, but the world will be soon revealed with lots of new techs, explorations, story plots, and exciting adventures. Now, let's talk about why should you read this story. - To improve the length of your little brother - To laugh out and forget all kinds of tension - To immerse yourself in the world of VR and superheroes - To support me!!!

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Yin-Yang Harmony System

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Sin_Supreme
Sin_SupremeLv4Sin_Supreme

bhai mike tyson bahek aaru naam aayena. like aaru naam pani hunthyo ni. random name generator use gare hunthyo ni

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthorSabin_Subedi_Fei

For further information, please read the free chapters in your free time. Within free chapters, you will get a pretty good idea for the story.

Daoist_void
Daoist_voidLv15Daoist_void

Who’s the artist

DaoistP1Tq4W
DaoistP1Tq4WLv1DaoistP1Tq4W

Hey, can I join your discord? The link in the description is invalid.

Thesoultaker88
Thesoultaker88Lv5Thesoultaker88

I have some questions 1)will mc love his harem or will it be more like one nightstand and leave 2)will there be drama and last 3) will mc takes his harem with him if he goes to far away places

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthorSabin_Subedi_Fei

I don't want to give spoilers but.......... Drama is not confirmed yet but you can see some of it in earlier locked chapters. As for 1st and 2nd questions, he cultivates with the help of his harem.

Thesoultaker88:I have some questions 1)will mc love his harem or will it be more like one nightstand and leave 2)will there be drama and last 3) will mc takes his harem with him if he goes to far away places
devilboybk
devilboybkLv14devilboybk

first time nepali flag dekhi khusi lagyo

xP_Hero
xP_HeroLv2xP_Hero

FFS why did you name the MC after the boxer? Now when one reads his name, he will think about a person totally diferent from the story, breaking the immersion. If you carelessly give names for your characters, you're not respecting your own work and originality.

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthorSabin_Subedi_Fei

I didn't know that Mike Tyson was the name of a famous boxer. Sorry but I do not watch boxing.

xP_Hero:FFS why did you name the MC after the boxer? Now when one reads his name, he will think about a person totally diferent from the story, breaking the immersion. If you carelessly give names for your characters, you're not respecting your own work and originality.
The_Starters
The_StartersLv1The_Starters

will mc take females left and right? or will be rational?? and how much big will be the harem!!

Legendary_Gear5
Legendary_Gear5Lv13Legendary_Gear5

From what i saw in a review the mc is dense is that true ? Bc i cant stand them

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthorSabin_Subedi_Fei

He is not dense. He is just scared.

Legendary_Gear5:From what i saw in a review the mc is dense is that true ? Bc i cant stand them
burningfightingfig
burningfightingfigLv14burningfightingfig

😂😂😂nah ur trolling

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:I didn't know that Mike Tyson was the name of a famous boxer. Sorry but I do not watch boxing.
A_Cultured_Man
A_Cultured_ManLv13A_Cultured_Man

Are you serious?? Where did you even heard the name then...just curious

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:I didn't know that Mike Tyson was the name of a famous boxer. Sorry but I do not watch boxing.
Langoo
LangooLv12Langoo

but MC focus on fist fighting.

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:I didn't know that Mike Tyson was the name of a famous boxer. Sorry but I do not watch boxing.
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiAuthorSabin_Subedi_Fei

I have written other novels where MC fights with his fist.

Langoo:but MC focus on fist fighting.
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RemoWilliams
RemoWilliamsLv15RemoWilliams

Can you tell where you live ? Because Mike Tyson is quite famous all around the world since more than 30 years, only second to Mohamed Ali. Lol

Sabin_Subedi_Fei:I didn't know that Mike Tyson was the name of a famous boxer. Sorry but I do not watch boxing.