Review Detail of Chaos_Swan_king in Stephen's Universe: Solitude

I agree, it also kinda goes against the feel of the show. A bit counter intuitive.

Thank you for your honest criticism. I'll give you a little glimpse of the future. I'll mainly focus on Lapis, Peridot, Pearl, and Spinel. As for the feeling with the show, I'm trying to show everything as it would look in reality, well, in the future we'll still see what happens.

After reading further into what you wrote, I see what you mean with realism. You are not planing on pulling any punches or shying away from gory stuff. However, PERSONALLY still think that a harem would not really work. However I still wish you the best of luck in your endeavors. I won’t reading forwards, but you have re-ignited the idea of posting a SU fic. I have one that I’ve been playing with for some time (almost a year). Though never had the time to post it, and get it started. I might durring the summer.

They are right about fidelity, but remember that in the same program there are polygamous relationships and if you don't believe me, take a good look at the program.

I don't get what they are on about there are many ways around what I guess they are talking about one is that he could have a power that attracts them to him or if he gets both girls(cause I am guess the faithful part is gems being faithful to other gems(I guess)) then it isn't really them being unfaithful if both would be in a relationship with the MC thus still in a relationship with each other just through the MC, or just make it an AU where they aren't in that kind of relationship so they would be free to get with the MC. There are other ways as well but i am too sleepy to think of them right now

If that was true then why are there multi fused Gems? Like the caterpillar (forgot her name) Cartoon Network just showed us what was appropriate since it was ya Know A KIDS SHOW. so whos to say they cant have harems? We just havent seen any

that's not romantic love but just a very close group of friends. they themselves have said that they stay together because they enjoy each other's company.

Ok ok sure if thats true then...does it really matter its a ff there’s been plenty of non canon stuff so far who’s to say the author didn’t tweak some things to make the story There own? The MC just went through some silent hill and black mirror type towns I doubt that the author is Super conserned with sticking with all the gem lore and way of thinking. Thanks for the refresh of thE caterpillars situation though. I couldent remember why they were fused

I also don't care too much. If the story is well written and the plot is interesting, I can read it despite my dislike towards the harem. It would be better if there was no harem, but I won't stop him if the author truly wants to. After all, it is his story.

mmm all of them do be petite types, is that your personal type of smth?