Review Detail of OOA in TBATE- A force to be reckoned with

Yeah, the story till now is pretty much the same as thr original but that will change soon, it has begun changing already and will be much different from the training arc. As for Fayden being more of a side character, you mean him not being as well known as Arthur right? Or do you mean his lesser interactions with the cast? If its the first case, well ever heard of deception? Of appearing weak amd being strong? Well thats it. And if its the second, his interaction with people is low during the beginning of the story is less because, well its because I didn't want to make the characters seem too ooc and since this is my first fic the chances of that happening were extremely high. At the end of the day I'll tell you what I told the other guy, don't like it don't read it, I can't force you to keep reading it, but if you do stay, there are a lot of changes and twists I've planned to make so you'll miss those just saying.

Bruhhhh I think some people have a rule with reading a novel or fanfics and that’s the 3 chap or episode rule just like watching new anime And you can’t tell to your readers that you have to wait like 30+ just to change some little plots I mean come on let’s admit it you’re just lazy about thinking 🤨 And btw you can release more chapter because you just copied it from the Original No hurt fellings here just saying the factS

'And you can't tell your readers that you have to wait like 30+ just to change some little plots' 1) Guess what? I just did. 2) I never said the change in plot will be little, if I did mean little change its already there. I meant more major changes since its easier to chsnge the plot in the training and the war arc rather than the toddler and school arc. Albeit I am changing the school arc a bit. As for waiting 30 + chapters, well if you're unwilling to then its fine by me. And sure I am lazy, sue me. Everybody is lazy you can't change that. I have given this story a lot of thought and have planned a lot of changes, there's nothing I can do if those changes are related to certain aspects of the story I haven't reached yet. As for my update rate being what it is due to me copying the original, yeah what of it? A fanfic doesn't mean it has to be very different from thr original ever since its beginning, it may diverge mid way and yet be awesome. And where are we story wise? At the rate turtle is going, tbate will habe 550 chapters at a minimum, and where am I in the story? In the 50s, I'm like 10% through the story, most of it is still left. As I said, I do plan changes just not yet, not like others who have changed the story a lot since the beginning and have toddlers being powerful as heck. (I'm not targeting you sociophobia don't take it as such, neither am I targeting Zac) I myself am a bit uncomfortable writing a story where frickin 7 year olds have power enough to match a Lance, I'm more comfortable writing a teenage mc with that kind of power and my one wilp have that and even more power by the time he comes back from training arc.(not epheotus training, he won't go there so don't say something like, even that will be a copy from the original, because it wont, it will be original)