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BlaccLotus
BlaccLotusLv123yr
2021-05-19 18:32

F.a.s.c.i.n.a.t.i.n.g and very well written book. Impeccably written story and characters. Unique, rich and captivating concept. Well deserved five stars for the design of female lead alone. Honestly, I couldn't get enough of Alice as she's such an intelligent, dominant and sexy female characters. I've always had a hot for capable and regal female character and she's such a hot babe 😤 Writing wise, story wise, characters wise, female lead wise. All rightly deserve perfect five stars. The way author introduced and explained things is great. The writer is great with her choice of words and her style in structuring sentence. Her writing is cool and she is very great in writing the dialogue. I've managed to read all the available chapters and genuinely like the story. Story development has been good so far, the anticipation and guessing keeps me at the edge every time. This book is extremely comfortable to read, way above most of webnovels. Overall it's very nice reading experience and I could imagine myself reading through the very end of the story. And maybe if you don't mind me asking, how many chapters you're planning for this book? I hope you can write this book to the end. Anyway, good luck!

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Jo_J
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Thank you so much <3 The story is completed, has 72 chaps and have to add 2 more.

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Well even if I want to give it a 4 stars the author makes it so that this choice is impossible (not that I wanted to give it 4 stars in the first place) The writing quality is poetic and flows wonderfully as you read. Character dev is amazing, so with story dev and world back. There really aren't that many flaws in this story. 5 stars Things based on my opinion - [This is all from my personal opinion and preference, so they are just things that I feel the author could do to improve reader experience, by all means author doesn't have to follow this as this is my opinion] - Synposis needs a bit of work imo as the first thing I thought when a read it was NTR (betrayal and love don't go in the same sentence) - Chapters are just named chapter 1, chapter 2, chapter 3, which is not bad but I would prefer it if they had a title, to get a little bit of info on how the story will flow in the future. (well this is my opinion, and even then I still love the story so it's not really an issue, i get it that the author might be trying to avoid possible spoilers) - Premium...why start premium at 20 chaps? I know you have an amazing story, but starting premium at only 20 chapters is a massive turn-off for most readers on web novels. By the time they reached 20 chapters they wouldn't have had enough time to fully immerse themselves in the story and thus you might be losing a lot of potential viewers. (This isn't an issue for me because I think your story is really good and I wouldn't mind unlocking it), but yea you should watch out for this.

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