It started Ok, but chapter 11 kinda ruined it. No warning in the synopsis or tags. It’s just dumped on us. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Chapter 11 nuf said.................................

pls don't ruin this like how god succession system did cause he added the mcs girls getting fcked by strap ons on his other members and some of his girls cheated on him with other girls who where also in relationships with different guys

I dont see anything special abt this book it average at best lol @̶͇̝̪̻̹̟̝̮̻̠̭̰̟͉̹̞͎̔͒ͬ̀̾͌͗͐ͥͨͥ͗͑͒͌̂̐́͜[̷̴̡͙͔̘̬̬̮̯ͤ̌͌̓ͪ̑̍́͘#̧̜̳͚̦̙͓̄̀̃́̌̂̔͋͆̾͠"̣͔͔̲̲̹̣̞̰̞̞͈ͯ̄ͥ̽͆ͦ̈ͭ̾ͥ̓͑̀͡͠*̶̭͔͔̣̟̯̙͚̼̪ͪ̉̽͐͗ͪ̄̓̎ͧ͊ͣ̄ͪͮ́̚͝≠̰͎̮͉̼̪̫̹̀͗̋͐͋̏ͮ̀́͡͞ͅ}̷̑͊̀̃͌̇̅̅́͛̉ͬͯͩ̅͑́́͏̪̹̥̜̥̤͚̟̖͎̠̬̮̤̜̮+̣̘͚͚̟͗̅ͬͧ́́̌̃͗̋̉͑̏́́ͅ\͕̮̙̅̆̋̋ͮ̂̔̏̃̐ͯ̃̄͛́̚͢͝͠.̢͙̣̪̖̠̮̭͚͈̜͍̖̙̙̎̌͌̊̇͗ͩ̋ͫ́ę͓̻̰̤̱̻̹̺̟̙̟̼͔̳̜́ͩ̇̔ͩͬ̽͒̊̊͜͡͝&̸̧̟͉͓͔̪̟̫͓̰̩̼̦̟̫ͯ̂͛ͣ͌̾ͦ̉͋ͪͥ̍͗̽͐͂̀͞#̵̮͚̱͍͚̟ͫ͛̍ͯͮ̃̈́͋͗͌ͩ̅̚͢͟͟ ͐̆̆ͫ͊͛ͩ҉̢͏̩̲͖̙̦̱̖͇̠ù̙̭̗̞̭͙̘͔̤̺̤̩̺̯͚̙ͦͮͧ̃͆̉ͧ̒ͯͩ̑̍̚͟ͅ€̡̈̑̉̀ͤͧ̋ͨͪͧ̈͌҉̸̮̭͕͖̻̲̜͔̜͝¤̧̹̭͖̞͎̪͓̰̲͇̠̳͍̲̫̮̒́͑̾̋ͫ͘̕ͅ£͕̮̩̲̪̜̝ͩͬ́ͯ̉͌̉͑ͮͧ͘͜ͅè̶̙͓̩͉̱̲̝͎̲̻͕̫ͩ̏ͧͨͪ̓̇̒͂̅̏ͯ̿ͧ̚͟͟͞͝%͑͋͑͑ͫͨ̄͗̋̿͂̽̇҉͕̗̝̯̻̪̻̭̜͎̹̖͈̰͈͔͘͢͡!̹͍̹̰͍̬̙̟̥̭̫͎̮̖̜ͬ͊ͬ̇ͪ͛ͤ̎ͭ́̍̔͒͐̂͐͒͠͝ͅ@̵̗̰̦̲͚͈͎̤̗ͣͦ̽̋̌͌̃̂̎́͞͞#̞̲̣̭̥̭͖̬͔̳̇͋̋ͬ͆̆̈̉̑̽͌ͨ̽̔̅̒͟͢[͗̓̓̓̆̒̆͂̿̈́ͪ͆ͧͪ҉̬̤̻̳̬̮̗̜͈͜ͅ~̶̴̢̦̳͇̮͔̩̮̺̪̼̱̺͈̖̻͉͑̔͆̏ͦ͗͌͂̎̅̀̿̕͘

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You get 5 stars from me, i love the fact that you are doing HoTD fanfic (multiverse?) lets just hope that this one doesn’t drop after like 30 chapters, and although i don’t love the fact that there are other reincarnators/contestants i don’t hate it either, but thats because i didn’t really see them yet... Kinda wondering tho, is there rape in the story? I hope there isn’t

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Why not just do both as it can be done for love and war goes hand in hand...it good so keep it up and do remember no one is perfect and that is especially true when its your first time as that whats makes us human

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