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Vivan_Maurya
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2021-06-15 12:02

Really good story, i like the premise, there are some mysteries, there is something dark behind the MC's past but its written very well, keeping the suspense alive, and the whole embracing the new gender thing isn't very exaggerated, i liked that as well, and his cough her attitude is nice, her style is good, but the mirko internship thing, i am honestly tired of it, almost all the MHA fanfics i have read recently have something to do with mirko, i wanted some other character, but that's my personal opinion, count it as a suggestion, the world building makes a lot of sense, and its not idealistic good job there as well, and although there are a few errors here and there, the overall flow of the story is very smooth and the pacing is very well done, all characters feel alive and not just forgotten after thier scene is over, you have a lot of talent, i'll be looking forward to your future works author-san

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BlackSwordman1234
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This makes me want to pick this up again. I am writing a fanfic called Lightning and Fire rgiven form(DxD) I put this on hiatus, but it is my most favorite fanfic.

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