Review Detail of Wooden_pupper in Draconic evolution

Hey guys I thank you for reading my book, I started it like five years ago in my high school creative writing class and one of my friends and me found it while going through my old laptop. He dared me to post so I did, sorry that the first few chapters aren’t that good, I’d like to think it improves as the story continues. I’m sorry for my bad updating schedule, my job has a lot of overtime so I try to work on it when I can.