Review Detail of FrozenAce in DXD: Ultimate Cultivation

Item: DXD: Ultimate Cultivation
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

FrozenAceLv42yrFrozenAce

the story has a lot of potential, and if the author keeps up with it, it can be a great webnovel. However the story is moving very fast and there isn't much character development, or a lot of world background, however, the fact that it is a fanfic negates some of the lack of world background, it is still a good idea to write more about the world. writing about the world also might help in slowing down the story.

DXD: Ultimate Cultivation

DaoistXzVSxK

Liked it!

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DaoistXzVSxKAuthorDaoistXzVSxK

the reason why there isn't much background right now is because the world already exists. plus I haven't even started the actual story yet. The whole story that we all know and love will be the first volume. I plan on expanding the base story in volume 2... you'll see.

2yr

FrozenAceLv4FrozenAce

can't wait to see it

DaoistXzVSxK:the reason why there isn't much background right now is because the world already exists. plus I haven't even started the actual story yet. The whole story that we all know and love will be the first volume. I plan on expanding the base story in volume 2... you'll see.

2yr

FrozenAceLv4FrozenAce

I'll most likely end up deleting and making a new review once you start volume 2

DaoistXzVSxK:the reason why there isn't much background right now is because the world already exists. plus I haven't even started the actual story yet. The whole story that we all know and love will be the first volume. I plan on expanding the base story in volume 2... you'll see.

2yr