Review Detail of Nekonigiri001 in My Adorably Manipulative King

Hi Adorables, Author here! Below points might be useful when you want to read this book. -- It is in first POV (I normally prefer writing from third POV. This is my attempt to try writing something out of my comfort zone and I kid you not, I struggled writing them. If you have time to spare, do comment if you think the writing is rubbish or not) -- It's not rated G for sure I have zero experience writing smut and its likeness. So if you cringe or you're in favour, let me know. Feedback is thoroughly welcome, good or bad. -- It is fast-paced Purely because I am not used to writing first POV and it made it appear botchy. But I have not gotten a decent amount of criticism to switch the whole story to third POV, which definitely would pan out into a better and smoother reading, with details that might interest you. -- It's on paused. For various reason. One, first POV is HARD! Due to lack of feedback, I have no way knowing if the story is good enough to continue or how mediocre it is for me to adjust. Two, the silence is truly demotivating. If you are reading this, it would help loads if you could provide feedback and comment which chapter you stopped and why. Or if you finished reading them and enjoyed it. Either way, I am seeking to improve myself. Thank you Adorables!