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sunnybala
sunnybalaLv43yr
2021-05-26 09:31

Everything in story is good but MC character has not been defined I mean he has no clear goals he is just going with flow and plus between conversations btw MC and sasuke or Naruto MC shows too much selflessness for them it feels like MC has not accepted being reincarnated and is just playing a game for his own enjoyment and make MC more selfish with clear goals one of the main reasons no one likes sakura is all she wants is to be a good wife make MC have higher ambitions

Born as Sakura With a System

NiksElDrago
4.5
64 Chs

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KhadaFourJhin
KhadaFourJhinLv4

Quick review: Yeah it is pretty good. Sakura has never even come close to being my favorite character in naruto and if anything I hate her to some extent with how she handled Naruto's situation but she's alright in Boruto. This story made a version of Sakura, which I actually like. A matured and calm version of Sakura that knows right from wrong. The grammar is pretty good and the plot so far has been really good. I have enjoyed every chapter, and even if this is a yuri (I don't usually read Yuri at all) I shall continue reading as I've read the other more famous Yuri Naruto FF. All I hope is the author doesn't drop this and updates more as I can see this getting somewhere. I shall donate my power stones whenever I read a chapter and if I have extra ones. Good luck developing this story and do it properly as I saw you want this to be your best work. Thank you for this underrated gem!

3yr

AzagalPlay
AzagalPlayLv14

Hard to find fanfics without harems on this website these days

3yr
rackthethird
rackthethirdLv13

What can I say I like what I’ve read so far...

3yr
Fallensnug
FallensnugLv12

Ok now I’m starting to worry. This is one of the best Sakura fan fic I have ever seen and I hate hate HATE for it to be discontinued like every other underrated novels out there. I’m not concerned about updates at this point. I’m concerned about your well-being. Author, you just went and vanished like the Avatar the last air bender. You didn’t say anything or left behind any word. Give us a sign that you are alive please!

3yr
Frog_King
Frog_KingLv2

Im a simple man. I see sakura i leave bad review. even if the mc is not like sakura its still a girl

3yr
NormalMindset
NormalMindsetLv1

this is verry overrated. the storry has poor character dialogue and no creative storyline, it's like copying any other sakura fanfiction and just throwing out silly system cliches. Pretty good when you read it while drunk

3yr
Zero_619
Zero_619Lv5

I never understand the need for authors to genderbend characters or transmigrating a male person into a female one and vice versa. I mean is it too much to ask if you just transmigrate the same gender.

3yr
twistedloops
twistedloopsLv3

Read upto ch 36, this is my review so far. Pardon my poor grammar Really good story. Author really knows his stuff. Not too op and a balanced system. Powers and abilities abide by Naruto World rules. Story upto ch 36 is very trtrue to canon with minor changes, lookinh forward to more changes in the future. Defenitely worth a read

3yr
Doge_Blade
Doge_BladeLv14

i saw sakura, i leave 1 star

3yr
Racist_King
Racist_KingLv12

Is this Yuri???. (￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)(￣▼￣)

3yr
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