I have no problem with the plot and story quality. But there is a problem with writing style that made me press the brakes of my car and run then brake again in succession. There is sometimes sentenses that doesn't start with capital letters and there's an overuse of commas in the story. Maybe you should lessen it? Haha....peace my friend ✌️ I don't want to be a critique BTW but I think you needed it the most right now 😉
JimothyJonkers
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