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LilaB
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2021-05-16 08:10

So far so good. I really would like to see more from these characters' development. This author is pretty good already, so I am willing to see where this goes. Please release more chapters, thanks 😊

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Chichii
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Thank you for the review dear💕And yes expect regular update from today onwards😌I have learnt a lot from my previous work. Hopefully I don’t mess it up🥰

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MysticAmy
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As expected from the author of the amazing contemporary romance book entitled “Flash Marriage: The Domineering Wife,” I already know that her take on fantasy romance stories would be great as well! 😉 I decided to leave a review even though I just read the first 6 posted chapters so far; I will further support my review in the near future to say more about the work~! 💪 Let’s start with writing quality. I do say that this is a deserving of a perfect rate of 5! 🤩 I like how it is easy to read—not too difficult, not too mediocre, either! It has the right balance and you could say that the author is not trying hard to choose highfalutin words just for the sake of having difficult vocabs in the story. I also like how there are no grammar mistakes (so far) in the story! Being a person who majored in English both undergrad and MAs, I actually like this! Applaud! 👏 Update stability: of course, it is a given—a rating of 5! 😁 I know the author can focus on writing this story now that she has finished the other! 💪 Great job! 🤩 The author will definitely update this more in the upcoming days so let’s stay tuned! Story development is a 5. Yes, I know it just started, but I like how the story has a refreshing start. It didn’t come as a story that is too rushed. A person who would read this could deduce that the story will have a flow that is neither not too slow, not too fast. Just at the right flow with information instilled here and there, making sure that she will not be doing info dumps, too! I like how she established a wonder about our ML, Elias, and what’s in store for our gal, Alyssa! 😉 Character development—another 5! I must say I like how Alyssa is different from the other story that the author previously made because I thought Alyssa is going to be strong like her character in her other novel. I like how the author is experimenting something different—her character here like a normal FL who’s going to college and meeting our boy here, Elias, with a mysterious background. It got me thinking what kind of secret is he hiding. A vampire, a demon, an angel, perhaps? A wolf? Or a rare kind of immortal being? Who knows?! Let’s find out together! 🤩 Finally, world background—a 5! 😁 With this being set in the modern world with fantasy concepts thrown here and there soon in the upcoming chapters, I know the author is going to be well prepared about this story in the long run! Of course, I know she will put unique concepts of her world soon! 🤩 An overall rate of 5~! 😉 Of course, I’m proud of my big sister’s accomplishments and improvement! Like I said, the review doesn’t end here—I’ll definitely supplement more once I read the upcoming chapters, doing my best in catching up so I could make sure I’ll not miss something I’d regret! 🤩 This is a story to look forward to! 🥰😘 Enjoy and read, loves! I know the author will have something steamy for us once we get a hold of her plot as we read together! 😏

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